Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Love Possible..!



He altered the ego
and made a move,
The sense was divine
He felt a groove,

Lost in memories
Tranquil was the feeling,
He felt heart at ease
Wounds were healing,

He never was so happy
Even sadness could fill a pond,
But now when love happened 
so he was only fond of this bond...!

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10 comments:

  1. AltonianJune 8, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    I think I get it - but 'sadness full of pond' has me guessing I'm afraid.

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  2. VL SheridanJune 8, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Ah, second chances. That's what makes life worth living.

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  3. AnonymousJune 8, 2011 at 10:18 PM

    I love the first line and the second stanza!

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  4. AnonymousJune 8, 2011 at 10:29 PM

    Nice work and very true..! Really liked it...!! :)

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  5. Sheilagh LeeJune 9, 2011 at 2:11 AM

    oh he grown to liking being sad?I'm I understanding correctly

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  6. Andy SewinaJune 9, 2011 at 4:20 AM

    Phew, a pond full of sadness, perhaps. I like the way this starts.

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  7. Kwee Cats and ArtJune 9, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    He has become accustomed to being sad, so is now happy in sadness...Yes? Interesting.

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  8. Thom GabrukiewiczJune 9, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    I like the way you structured this, such great lines throughout.

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  9. Scribblers IncJune 22, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    damn sweet! :)
    And I love the coffee cup and spider guy! :D

    wishes
    Scribblers Inc.

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  10. Lalita SinghJuly 13, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Thankuu so much all..! :)

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