Thursday, January 27, 2011

Horror from Past!!!


It was conniption. They really made her aghast. She stood there blank, looked at the empty street and rushed towards home. It was all janky from every corner. They ruined everything. 


She closed the door behind and broke into tears. What they want from me, why are doing this to me? I never did anything bad to them as I don’t even know them. Who are they and why are they following me?  So many thoughts kept creeping in her horrified mind.  Is it something related to my past, did they find me, do they know who am I? 


Oh Lord, please save me. How long the ghosts of my past will scare me? She crashed on bed and scooch over to get the remote. A bit of music might help her to relax her senses a bit. 

9 comments:

  1. This is a troubling scene Lalita..I hope the music helped her and her room was a safe place..Jae

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  2. Well I am confused, and I think this is the twist in these small snippets of fiction, they pick us up from somewhere and then leave us a little ahead, and we are left, hungry for a little more.

    Nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. This made me ask all kinds of questions. But I'm sure that was your goal!

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  6. Interesting, and yes I am full of questions as well.

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  7. Sheilagh Lee:wow questions left unanswered I like this

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