Wednesday, December 8, 2010

My life Before You!!

Outer surface isn't always the only base to Judge,
One could never see whole world sitting on the Edge..

I knew you but never imagined myself being a part of You,
Distance faded slowly, came closer and I fell deep for you, ..

A sudden Fear creeps in seeing the approaching nightfall,
I want only you around me always as for me it would be all..

Safe I feel my existence when I see it's attached with yours,
Time seems to fly so fast than ever even tough it is hours..

Looking in past I realize sometimes how life turned upside- down,
You were there by my side, treated me like queen without crown..

Just want to say I'll be there with you, no matter what happens,
With every passing second of time, my love for you only deepens!!!


  1. Lovely ode to the person 'you' love..Jae

  2. Lovely emotions very natural and instinctive!!

  3. Now this is a great piece. Very sweet while not being sugary in your words. Honest and open, makes me feel the true love here. Thanks for sharing with us!

  4. Oh another blog by you again?
    Lalita you are a talented writer here I must say!
    You are a poet too? Lovely..:D

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    love your poetry.
    keep it up.